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What did you do to that synopsis on M05? --[[User:Hmdwgf|Hmdwgf]] 02:12, 15 May 2010 (UTC) | What did you do to that synopsis on M05? --[[User:Hmdwgf|Hmdwgf]] 02:12, 15 May 2010 (UTC) | ||
:Burjojo changed several instances of the phrase "off of" to "off". | |||
:@Burjojo On that note it might be an idea to write something on at least one of the edit summaries for a page, even if its just one word such as "grammar". Its hard to spot one changed word in a solid wall of text. (Note this suggestion is entirely optional and and carries a large amount of hypocrisy given that I often fail at writing edit summaries.) Thank you for your time.--[[User:Beligaronia|Beligaronia]] ([[User talk:Beligaronia|talk]]) 10:46, 15 May 2010 (UTC) |
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"The virus takes about two days to wear off of an infected Pokémon, but the period of time can vary."
Should the of be still removed in this case? It sounds a little wrong without it... CuboneKing 05:00, 12 May 2010 (UTC)
- How about: "The infected Pokémon can infect other Pokémon with the virus for a period of two days, however the Pokérus timer can be delayed by several methods including placing the infected Pokémon in a PC box."--Beligaronia (talk) 06:38, 12 May 2010 (UTC)
I see what you mean, CuboneKing. It does sound a bit clumsy either way. I'm in favour of the complete overhaul suggested by Beligaronia. I'll go ahead with it. --Burjojo 13:26, 12 May 2010 (UTC)
M05 Synopsis
What did you do to that synopsis on M05? --Hmdwgf 02:12, 15 May 2010 (UTC)
- Burjojo changed several instances of the phrase "off of" to "off".
- @Burjojo On that note it might be an idea to write something on at least one of the edit summaries for a page, even if its just one word such as "grammar". Its hard to spot one changed word in a solid wall of text. (Note this suggestion is entirely optional and and carries a large amount of hypocrisy given that I often fail at writing edit summaries.) Thank you for your time.--Beligaronia (talk) 10:46, 15 May 2010 (UTC)