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::How about: "The infected Pokémon can infect other Pokémon with the virus for a period of two days, however the Pokérus timer can be delayed by several methods including placing the infected Pokémon in a PC box."--[[User:Beligaronia|Beligaronia]] ([[User talk:Beligaronia|talk]]) 06:38, 12 May 2010 (UTC)
::How about: "The infected Pokémon can infect other Pokémon with the virus for a period of two days, however the Pokérus timer can be delayed by several methods including placing the infected Pokémon in a PC box."--[[User:Beligaronia|Beligaronia]] ([[User talk:Beligaronia|talk]]) 06:38, 12 May 2010 (UTC)


I see what you mean, CuboneKing. It does sound a bit clumsy either way. I'm in favour of the complete overhaul suggested by Beligaronia. I'll go ahead with it --[[User:Burjojo|Burjojo]] 13:26, 12 May 2010 (UTC)
I see what you mean, CuboneKing. It does sound a bit clumsy either way. I'm in favour of the complete overhaul suggested by Beligaronia. I'll go ahead with it. --[[User:Burjojo|Burjojo]] 13:26, 12 May 2010 (UTC)

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Should I?

"The virus takes about two days to wear off of an infected Pokémon, but the period of time can vary."

Should the of be still removed in this case? It sounds a little wrong without it... CuboneKing 05:00, 12 May 2010 (UTC)

How about: "The infected Pokémon can infect other Pokémon with the virus for a period of two days, however the Pokérus timer can be delayed by several methods including placing the infected Pokémon in a PC box."--Beligaronia (talk) 06:38, 12 May 2010 (UTC)

I see what you mean, CuboneKing. It does sound a bit clumsy either way. I'm in favour of the complete overhaul suggested by Beligaronia. I'll go ahead with it. --Burjojo 13:26, 12 May 2010 (UTC)