User contributions for Tomohito

8 April 2012

• 18:0818:08, 8 April 2012 diff hist +2‎ m Dr. Namba ‎ →‎History: Grammar edited slightly in last sentence
• 04:4304:43, 8 April 2012 diff hist +2‎ m Kangaskhan (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Trivia: Corrected tense: changed 'born with a baby in her pouch' to 'born with a baby in their pouch.'
• 04:4104:41, 8 April 2012 diff hist +1‎ m Seadra (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Intro: Added comma to separate clauses reg. pre and post-evolutions
• 04:3604:36, 8 April 2012 diff hist −29‎ Starmie (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Habitat: Nocturnal schedule changed to behavior ('behavior' more appropriate biological term). Removed redundant statements reg. sharing habitat w/ Staryu. Added necessary period at end of paragraph. Thanks!
• 04:3004:30, 8 April 2012 diff hist +22‎ m Starmie (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Physiology: Last sentence of physiology is a fragment. Added "This second set of arms is..." and a comma to improve sentence structure and explain the reference to the second set of arms better. Thanks!

6 April 2012

• 04:4104:41, 6 April 2012 diff hist −18‎ m Infernape (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Special abilities: 'martial arts' changed to 'martial art' (martial arts refers to multiple styles), changed beginning of second sentence ('of its kind' seems a bit awkward and vague). Thanks!)
• 04:3704:37, 6 April 2012 diff hist −3‎ m Infernape (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Physiology: Removed extra 'a' in beginning of first sentence, unnecessary comma after 'swirl-patterned'
• 04:2304:23, 6 April 2012 diff hist +3‎ m Empoleon (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Behavior: Phrasing of last sentence is awkward. Edited to make sure tense and grammar make sense. Thanks!
• 00:4600:46, 6 April 2012 diff hist +9‎ m Dratini (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Behavior: Changed "it is a myth" to "they are mythological" to maintain proper tense throughout ("Dratini are..."/"it is..." changed to "Dratini are..."/"they are...")
• 00:3600:36, 6 April 2012 diff hist −8‎ Spinda (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Physiology: "upward standing" is an awkward phrase, and "upright" alone basically implies the same thing, and is typical terminology when referring to standing animals. Thanks!
• 00:3000:30, 6 April 2012 diff hist +1‎ Scizor (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Trivia: Changed grammar error "Those move are..." to "Those moves are..."

18 February 2012

• 16:2916:29, 18 February 2012 diff hist +7‎ m Sceptile (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Behavior: "carefully" and doing something "with care" are the same thing. Edited sentence reg. trees and plants to have a more correct tense, and to remove redundant adjectives.
• 15:4615:46, 18 February 2012 diff hist +2‎ m Charizard (Pokémon) ‎ →‎Behavior: Small grammar/tense correction: changed "battle and spend" to "battle, and spends"